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I'm so sick of ♥♫♥''love'' ♥♫♥songs,
they've brainwashed my soul.
Thought it was broken,
thought you made it whole.

So sick of the word ''forever'',
can't see the limits of death even in my head.
As i think of some one i love,
if they were safe,if they were happy,
i wouldn't even care if i was dead.

Those words cut so deeply,wrap around the old ones of pain,
wrap around those words from the past misfortunes,causing nagging doubts are those memories' revenge in this twisted game.

And the song's don't help,believe me,
it's bad enough,what your words mean to me.
This is ridiculous,i'm trying to explain it simply,
but apparently,you'll never seen see,
what i'm saying,what those words mean.

Of course i'm to selfish,
to simply let go.
Unless it made you happy,
in which case i'm sorry that
i didn't let go sooner,

I wish'd you understand,
but it seems that as if you're  thinking solar,
and i'm thinking lunar.

And yet again all i seem to say is i love you.
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another love poem of mine...god why do i write so many...oh,yeah...rite.....dam it.....
please comment

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:iconperfectpersonforyou:
lol that was nice but sad

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:iconmorbimyu:
thank you i guess.didn't realize it was sad.

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Hugs and redrum!
:iconperfectpersonforyou:
lol your welcome it's possibly just me trying to get over a dump

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I Never Knew That Everything Was Falling Through
That Everyone I Knew Was Waiting On A Queue
:iconmorbimyu:
oh.okieh,well i hope you feel better.my blessing with you.just curious,now that i think about it alot of my poems can seem sad.then again,one thing i've noticed is that any song or poem to do with love,if you've listened to the song enough,or it just means something to you,or just purely on the fact that it has anything to do with love,can make a person upset to the point of crying or pain just hearing it if your already upset or worried about some one you love.

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:iconperfectpersonforyou:
lol ok thanks

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I Never Knew That Everything Was Falling Through
That Everyone I Knew Was Waiting On A Queue
:iconmorbimyu:
ummm...no prob...sorry about that....

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Hugs and redrum!
:iconperfectpersonforyou:
lol don't be sorry and thanks again

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I Never Knew That Everything Was Falling Through
That Everyone I Knew Was Waiting On A Queue
:iconmorbimyu:
ok.no prob:hug:

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Hugs and redrum!
:iconperfectpersonforyou:
lol you wanna be friends?

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I Never Knew That Everything Was Falling Through
That Everyone I Knew Was Waiting On A Queue

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